Dolcett girl story

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Mariah and her stepmother are driving home through Dolcett County when they stopover at the local Girl-Mart. Mariah is excited to pick up a meat-girl to spit for her birthday, but her stepmother has more of a "drop-off" than a "pick-up" plan.

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This story is a commission for Uri whose story idea got me so excited I had to accept immediately. But it turns out enthusiasm can be a curse as I went into more and more detail on how I imagined the Girl-Mart to be like. Rather than rush through the whole story arc, we decided it'd be best to publish the story in multiple parts, so here's part 1. Posted by InvisibleHand 1 year ago Report.

Great story! The introduction to the world and setting is well done. I noticed a few tiny typos, but it was a joy to read. Looking forward to part 2! Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report. I did a few editing passes but with this story twice as long as my usual ones, I don't think I was as careful as I should have been with the typos.

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I'll try to check my carefully in part 2. Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report. Haha yeah, the original story commission brief didn't have anything happen to the stepmom. I thought it was more fun to have had Mariah have pre-arranged to have her sold but I'm not sure how much of that I'll get to show. We'll see how it goes. Posted by emikochan 1 year ago Report. Haha the stepmom has proved a lot more popular than I was expecting. The revised plan is that she will turn up again in the latter bit of Part 2. I'm not sure yet whether she gets delivered just as Mariah is served up, or if they spend some time caged together.

Posted by roostuf 1 year ago Report. Her biggest issue is just her inability to finger herself while tied up. Posted by kitvander Dolcett girl story year ago Report. Posted by BardicLasher 1 year ago Report. Posted by Turyun 1 year ago Report. Wonderful story!!! I'm sure it will look great, I'm really looking forward to seeing how Mariah will react in her new life as meat, I'm also curious to see what happens to Nicole Posted by DJ4K 1 year ago Report. This is one of my all time favorite Dolcett stories. I love all the small details like how the father liked free ranged meat and how the two girls had tried to get each other roasted before.

Oh thank you very much! It just brings a setting to life and provides lots of fun ideas for other stories. There's a part 2 of this I've got drafted, but have been stalling forever on finishing editing. I really should get back to it. I completely agree, extra world detail can make a story so much better.

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Like frosting on a cake. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. Good luck! Posted by Eter 1 year ago Report. The crazy part is that I actually had part 2 mostly written up just a few days after finishing part 1, but I stalled with editing and the delays grew and grew and here we are 6 months later. I feel so guilty about the delays. Anyway, as I don't know if I'll ever finish the draft of part 2, I'll throw it up here on google docs if you want a look.

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Keep in mind this was a rough draft, the latter half in particular is going to have a ificant rewrite, but it might be fun to read anyway. Thought the second part was super solid! Hope you get back to it sometime, but I totally get falling off stories.

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Ah thank you! I think it needs tidying up a lot. It's rather hard to have fairly smooth flowing prose when you don't have any names. It's constantly "the woman on the left, no the other left, the woman past that one, she smiles. A first person spit roast experience is always fun to witness ; Though I can attest its quite nice being in third person for that XD. Posted by BunnyWrites 9 months ago Report. I keep meaning to get back to this, but at the moment the commission queue is keeping me pretty busy.

BunnyWrites: I'm a slut for any kind of feedback, whether on my writing Dolcett girl story, your favourite bits, or alternative preferences on where you'd have preferred to see the story lead. I'm also happy to hear any story suggestions folk might have, sequel ideas, or alternative takes on what could happen.

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Please to post a comment. Posted by InvisibleHand 1 year ago Report Great story! Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Thanks! Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report sounds like they are both going to end up as meat and good ridence to them. Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report only that I want to see that money grabbing step-mum get her just desserts by becoming dessert. Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Haha yeah, the original story commission brief didn't have anything happen to the stepmom.

Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report just need an epilogue at the end to show her being taken away and I will be happy. Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Thank you so much! I'm so thrilled you liked it.

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Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Haha the stepmom has proved a lot more popular than I was expecting. Posted by kitvander 1 year ago Report Such a great one! Posted by BardicLasher 1 year ago Report This is great! Posted by Turyun 1 year ago Report Wonderful story!!! Posted by Turyun 1 year ago Report I'm sure it will look great, I'm really looking forward to seeing how Mariah will react in her new life as meat, I'm also curious to see what happens to Nicole Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Oh thank you very much!

Posted by DJ4K 1 year ago Report I completely agree, extra world detail can make a story so much better. Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report The crazy part is that I actually had part 2 mostly written up just a few days after finishing part 1, but I stalled with editing and the delays grew and grew and here we are 6 months later. Posted by kitvander 1 year ago Report Thought the second part was Dolcett girl story solid!

Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report Ah thank you! Posted by kitvander 1 year ago Report A first person spit roast experience is always fun to witness ; Though I can attest its quite nice being in third person for that XD. Posted by BunnyWrites 9 months ago Report Thanks!

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